My act 1 spreads are the same as during our critique except I moved "Act 1: Shots In The Dark" to a different spot.
For my act 2 spreads I wanted to use type as imagery. During this act, the comedian makes a joke, "the last jokes of his joke canteen dripping out onto a desert of cancer". I wanted to do a play on words which is why I decided to simulate a "desert" of of the word "cancer".
I really love your act 2. From afar it looks like a cool tecture and then when you make it larger you can read the text "cancer." Which I'm assming the story is about. Maybe you could make the design on the hand for act 1 out of text too... ?? to make them relatable. But either way they do relate because of your use of white space. Which is working very well in all of your designs. Good work.
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